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"I believe there is a god that holds the pendulum of time......interesting request in the last line.......?~elisa"
Posted by elisa on "Stop The Clock" by island warrior

"I'd have to agree with Ani, though it is simplistic form, it captures your emotion perfectly and is intense - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "Millimetre No. 9" by island warrior

"*catches breath* this is intense. the first stanza is an exceptional introduction to this. the flow is so rhythmic, its all echoeing in my brain. very well written and expressed. "
Posted by AniDayz on "Millimetre No. 9" by island warrior

"ooohh i LOVE this...great write."
Posted by AniDayz on "Forever Hungry" by island warrior

"a brilliant image - perfect in its length, and descriptive enough to leave behind an impression. Lovely. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "World Is A Pearl" by island warrior

"again its the last stanza that really gets me you are talented"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Forever Hungry" by island warrior

"i love the flow..i always favor the rhyming poems beacuse they roll of the toungue and seem more gaceful"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"thats last stanza was like a punch in the face for me...i hol those lines close to my heart..exelent work"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"Wow! ...uplifting and insightful...very well written! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"A strong message and true! excellent write....biting! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"beautiful message in this. beautiful write*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"this has to be a favourite now.. youve left me with this creepy sinister tingly vibe.. i love it."
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"oh my god... december eighth was the day that my house burnt down.. the day this was posted... as i started to read i could see it all clearly and the image was there.. and then you say those words.. and this whole thing.. whoa.. its fuccing amazing.. god"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"matches, webs, and paradise? im sold... :P"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Forever Hungry" by island warrior

"ive been left with the most awsome imagery... youve done this one way beyond well.. simply amazing."
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "World Is A Pearl" by island warrior

"wow"
Posted by Unknown on "World Is A Pearl" by island warrior

"Wow, you are too good to be true...no bad writes at all...."
Posted by Unknown on "Forever Hungry" by island warrior

"Your poetry always ends very well....it literally screams off the screen to be heard..."
Posted by Unknown on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"PS- killer last lines. "
Posted by Unknown on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"Holy shit, i love this write...i crave this kind of writing...i'm off to read some more...awesome."
Posted by Unknown on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"This is pretty intense. I like it... great work"
Posted by VenomPlease on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"oooohh..im gathering somethin' from this, not sure if im on track with it... 'judge not by the cover...look through the windows...it's all in the eyes..." this great and id love to know more..."
Posted by AniDayz on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"Great write all the way through. The ending was the best. Very cool write."
Posted by Silent Assassin on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"started and finished strongly. and i especially liked the conclusion, truth to be told in these words. good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"nice write written very well"
Posted by Unknown on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"nice write,cool beans"
Posted by happilydepressed on "Watch The Windows" by island warrior

"oh, what am i saying.. your flow is flawless within all of your works.. i liked the 3rd stanza the best! *tears*"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"amazing!!! that was beautiful it flowed amazingly well :) ~lost~"
Posted by lost_moody_soul on "Survival Inside" by island warrior

"Well said in such a short poem. This is a good example of the phaze "short and sweet""
Posted by Silent Assassin on "World Is A Pearl" by island warrior

"This was very good. I don't like that you have written a poem that I don't like."
Posted by Silent Assassin on "Forever Hungry" by island warrior

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