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Watch The Windows
By island warrior
Freight train of fury
Running in a straight line
Fueled by the torment
Of the words you unwind
Why must you toy
With what is unknown
The power of aggression
Differing from your own
Frightening thoughts
Splashing my mind
Taking over commonsense
Reality left behind
Speech is impaired
Vision unclear
Full of adrenalin
Void of all fear
Like looking through the windows
Of a house that is burning
Feel the intensity
Flames twisting and turning
So take heed my friend
Of the message that's given
Beware of the danger
And the way that it's hidden
Judge not by the cover
The friendly disguise
Look through the windows
It's all in the eyes
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Copyright 2004 island warrior
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Watch The Windows"
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, blue
(1409)
wrote:
A strong message and true! excellent write....biting! ~b
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A former member wrote:
PS- killer last lines.
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A former member wrote:
Holy shit, i love this write...i crave this kind of writing...i'm off to read some more...awesome.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
This is pretty intense. I like it... great work
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On Monday, December 20, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
oooohh..im gathering somethin' from this, not sure if im on track with it... 'judge not by the cover...look through the windows...it's all in the eyes..." this great and id love to know more...
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Great write all the way through. The ending was the best. Very cool write.
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A former member wrote:
started and finished strongly. and i especially liked the conclusion, truth to be told in these words. good work.
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A former member wrote:
nice write written very well
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
nice write,cool beans
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