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World Is A Pearl
By island warrior
Red roads of lightning
Burning trees felled
In the palm of a hand
A circle is held
Forever spinning round
A hidden strange world
Land sea and pupil
Together in a swirl
Eyeball is the shell
And iris the pearl
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Copyright 2004 island warrior
Published on Thursday, December 2, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Thorn
(283)
wrote:
I like. The surrealism shows restraint and keeps the imagery fairly neat. But I don't need to tell you all that. Again, I really like it.
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A former member wrote:
It is delicious in illustration. An original concept and shaped so intricately. Something only excavated by care and thoughtfulness.
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Short yet full of meaning. Amazing.
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
they say what I want to say... so yeah, what they said... *Raven*
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A former member wrote:
wow...you have an amazing way with words great write. ~Siren~
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
beautiful imagery...a masterpiece of brilliance. another wonderful write.
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
a brilliant image - perfect in its length, and descriptive enough to leave behind an impression. Lovely. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
wow
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Well said in such a short poem. This is a good example of the phaze "short and sweet"
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A former member wrote:
incredibly creative...how you managed to make such a vivid picture like this rhyme.....pure talent. -zay
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A former member wrote:
very lovely write
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On Thursday, December 2, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
this piece is lovely--it reads like an invocation or meditation--nicely done
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A former member wrote:
This is exceptional work . . the whole piece is absolute brilliance. Each line is magnificent . . a beautiful, masterful write ~ Rose
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
I concur. Brilliant write; Cosmic imagination! ~brian
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