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Forever Hungry
By island warrior
Errors in judgement
The lessons you learn
Mistakes are the matches
That make money burn
Such a fine line
Made clearer in time
Danger ever present
But not as present as your mind
Fly in a web
Spiders crowding round
Chequered is the tightrope
Of the web that is wound
Its a path to paradise
As freedom you grasp
Hunger now engulfs them
The spell forever cast
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Copyright 2004 island warrior
Published on Thursday, December 2, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Forever Hungry"
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, AniDayz
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wrote:
ooohh i LOVE this...great write.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, you are too good to be true...no bad writes at all....
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
This was very good. I don't like that you have written a poem that I don't like.
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
...wonderful description of greed and it's expense! ~b
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A former member wrote:
that was great.
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A former member wrote:
i'm a newbie, too....i love your flow, it is rhythmic...i enjoy your style.
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