Comments by All Members
- "well, the poem as a whole was a little blunt at points, but i absolutely am "IN LOVE" with the last stanza! those are words to live by! nice job! ^autumn^"
Posted by A Broken Soul on "Point Of View" by island warrior
- "Amazing job. A very enjoyable piece, I'm glad I read it. The last lines were my favorite. Impressive job. Wonderful and well written write."
Posted by K_Love on "Something Special" by island warrior
- "great write, this has got a really fast pace that seems to slide almost out of control - very emotive and expressive for lines that are so simple and short.... just awesome. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Little Boy Lost" by island warrior
- "...like being locked in a hellhole of saddness with your vocal chords ripped out and motion cracked and stolen from your joints..."
Posted by AniDayz on "Little Boy Lost" by island warrior
- "*swallowing*....but the lump in my throat has manifested itself into an infinite mass ....a heartwrenching...gut pulling...'nerve striking'[indeed] piece. "
Posted by AniDayz on "Little Boy Lost" by island warrior
- "ohh...this is so wonderfully done. the flow is captivating in and of itself, and the meaning of the write strikes me so hard.its like looking into the mirror of my mind;reading this. i love it. "
Posted by AniDayz on "Stop The Clock" by island warrior
- "ahhh, awesome rhythm, ironically reminds the rhythm reminds of the impossibility of stopping the flow of time..... your message is potent..... great work. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Stop The Clock" by island warrior
- "Ahh! Wonderful flowing piece...great message, well spoken...you did a marvelous job with the rhyming here! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Stop The Clock" by island warrior
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