Something Special

By island warrior

I can't be with you
You're too easy for me
I'm after a princess
And that you can't be

You don't respect yourself
And you won't respect me
Time will reveal
What now you don't see

You're body is a temple
Treat it as such
The most beautiful things
We can't always touch

So strut your stuff
And keep your esteem
Flutter your eyelids
And remain just a dream

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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Sunday, March 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • so_skeevy On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    i like it nice wording

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    ~The most beautiful things We can't always touch ~ wonderfully worded ~kristy

  • HiImFromJupiter On Monday, March 7, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11)By person wrote:

    wow ....hey island, on my planet they call me princesss...:) Great write ...few words say much

  • blue On Sunday, March 6, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Right on! I agree with you here, so very well spoken. ~b

  • K_Love On Sunday, March 6, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Amazing job. A very enjoyable piece, I'm glad I read it. The last lines were my favorite. Impressive job. Wonderful and well written write.

  • AniDayz On Sunday, March 6, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    wonderful...this says oh-so-much...lovely irony, and a lovely flow. it speaks loud and true...

  • A former member wrote: ouch...wonder who inspired such truth from you and thank goodness they did!

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