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Point Of View
By island warrior
It's great to share a room with you
Your beautiful aura
The things you do
You know I like your point of view
I hope you like mine too
When you're around I laugh a lot
Enjoy the moments
Forget what I'm not
But I'm not oblivious to everything
I know you're still hot
I hope you like me too
I want you intellectually
Just as much as sexually
I love you standing next to me
You know my love is true
I feel I need to be with you
Stuck right out at sea with you
Sitting in a tree with you
As long as it's just me and you
Because I love your point of view
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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Friday, March 25, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Point Of View"
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, AniDayz
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wrote:
this is delicately delicious. flowing absolutely *perfectly* together...this write has brought a smile to my face. *thankyou*
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On Saturday, March 26, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
so innocent and tender...i loved this, it made my heart flutter ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
aww this is adorable
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On Friday, March 25, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
awww.. very cute, gives me a smile on my face and a sense of tranquility. Lovely write.
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On Friday, March 25, 2005, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
well, the poem as a whole was a little blunt at points, but i absolutely am "IN LOVE" with the last stanza! those are words to live by! nice job! ^autumn^
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