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"You are fast becoming a favorite of mine. I look forward to the next"
Posted by Damien on "Untitled #38" by rwb35

"The pain of loss is felt throughout this piece, a pain recognizable by us all. Thanks for sharing. Well penned with a nice flow......................... ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Lament: Musings of a Penitent Heartbreaker" by rwb35

"Can feel how personal this is to you, lol besides the title of it of course. I also feel the pain of it all. Well done good sir I like you style! "
Posted by Unknown on "For Monica, wherever she may be" by rwb35

"Love it. Read this whilst listening to 'Coffin Nails' by Atreyu... a great combination."
Posted by Unknown on "Once More" by rwb35

"Thank you. I call this my "Kubla Khan" basing it on Samuel Coleridge Taylor's, I was told he was writing it in an opium dream and someone knocked on the door and he lost where he was going with it. Similar situation here."
Posted by rwb35 on "Palmistry (Unfinished)" by rwb35

"Like I said, I really enjoy your choice of verbiage, here, lends well to the grandiose format of an epic, even being unfinished, it's a solid, standalone piece in its own right and had I the room, this would easily inhabit my favorites list. As for an idea as to where this epic should go, I'm still trying to find that answer in regards to my own projects...I'm sure you'll find a muse of some sort, until then, just keep this piece at the back of your mind."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Palmistry (Unfinished)" by rwb35

"10. Worth the read. Relatable. "
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "Once More" by rwb35

"You raise and interesting premise about whether we do in fact manifest our own fears subconsciously. Vivid dark metaphors make this an intriguing read. Impressive. "
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled #10" by rwb35

"You capture "dark poetry'" without it feeling cliche or forced. Strong imagery screams throughout..I enjoyed it..thanks for the read"
Posted by River Lily on "Untitled #10" by rwb35

"Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it"
Posted by rwb35 on "Oblivion" by rwb35

"You have some powerful images in this write. I love "screamed myself awake again", You capture that feeling of falling perfectly with the building tension and suspense. "
Posted by Unknown on "Oblivion" by rwb35

"Glad that you enjoyed it. It's one of my stranger pieces"
Posted by rwb35 on "The New Denial" by rwb35

""Trapped in this limbo just before the fall Trying to make sense of it all Before the real fear comes racing home Will I always be so goddam alone?"...my god, how I relate to this...great write. "
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "The New Denial" by rwb35

"It's actually the second in a series that I seem to pick up every ten years or so. Glad that you enjoyed"
Posted by rwb35 on "The Bells of the Abbey: Ten Years Past" by rwb35

"This is so good. I was transported to somewhere cold and uncomfortable. Very captivating."
Posted by Unknown on "The Bells of the Abbey: Ten Years Past" by rwb35

"One of the worst things in my opinion to regret is words unspoken, you captivate in your writing ..pen beautifully with great emotion..hope to see more from you"
Posted by River Lily on "Untitled #26" by rwb35

"Perhaps an angel with broken wings.. Who screams in the darkness as I do... So powerful. I have an image so dark and gloomy... Yet so pristine and breathtaking. "
Posted by Unknown on "Forlorn" by rwb35

"She was certainly a major component to your soul. *hugs* This too shall pass. "
Posted by Unknown on "For Monica, wherever she may be" by rwb35

"Well written. The repetition is especially effective. "
Posted by Unknown on "Nowhere" by rwb35

"You convey your anguish well. The rhythm is breathtakingly beautiful - this flows so incredibly well. Nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled #26" by rwb35

"beautifully penned, regretful and sorrowful..nothing is more sad than love lost and love unspoken..much enjoyed."
Posted by River Lily on "For Monica, wherever she may be" by rwb35

"This... aludes to all senses, but it lingers in the most important place: the mind. There is dark beauty in this sadness, there's wisdom in the reflection. The textures I liked the most."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Untitled #34" by rwb35

"I loved the pace, it flowed almost as a song, but a truthful one. The rhymes are smart, and the rhetoric you use is quite aesthetic as well. I liked it."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Rhetoric" by rwb35

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