Comments by All Members
- "I get the dream aspect too... Very unusual format..but it still draws me in.. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "A kiss" by Jessica Orr
- "had a light feel although the subject matter was heavy and filled with longing and melancholy..much enjoyed ur unsual style. know its a bit late , but,welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Whisk away" by Jessica Orr
- "I really like this one, the closing stanza is especially well worded, "I am alive
a glorious feast, i know;
at risk of saying I do my best..." Really great job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "sterile I try" by Jessica Orr
- "Wow, what a great piece! I love the imagery and the broken, disjointed style with the "tick" inserted, which gave it the feel of a camera jerking between scenes and emotions and memories. Great job with this one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Pasture lands" by Jessica Orr
- "It must be read from bottom to top, right? I kind of understood more reading it that way... I think it talks about a dream, about being loved, but feeling guilt about it somehow. Anyway... I liked it. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "A kiss" by Jessica Orr
- "Wow just wow, that's an amazing poem. i'm too blown away to say anymore."
Posted by Unknown on "Stars" by Jessica Orr
- "The more I read of you the more impressed I am with your ability to break down and almost segregate the composition whilst retaining the whole, peppered with lines that almost don't make sense but tug on a corner of the mind like they should be making more sense than currently grasped... Long story short, I like your method."
Posted by indefined on "The interest of you" by Jessica Orr
- "A very unique view. This says so much about you as an artist. I didn't know where you were going with this at first but I couldn't stop reading. "
Posted by Damien on "Unpronounceable " by Jessica Orr
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