Untitled (7-5-15)
By Jessica Orr
Waking. a long road.
hair in my eyes.
not so long ago.
June is a name with birth
of warmth;
she knew why it's that way
but never raked a surface
straight.
His name was songs;
did she know why they sing,
there was more than
a first.
catchy, I see things
in you.
Never can a stop,
I look to some top plated
hill but it's just as deep:
call me your sweetie again,
you deserve it.
Can I?
Will lessons I teach
see me straight as
I keep looking for
an electric charge to
kill me and hate her again;
he will save a good start,
for June is the beginning.
Ends started with travel;
if I don't look I can fetch
and pretend I don't see
results.
they mimic what I want.
guess what?
It does matter as it lives.
breathe into me again,
as I can alway remember
sleep started,
roads have not known
to begin without
waking again.
Comments on "Untitled (7-5-15)"
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A former member wrote:
Such an excellent piece... Soft, dark, a hint of anger maybe... really beautiful...
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On Sunday, July 5, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Interesting and well written piece. The closing lines were especially well phrased and closed this up nicely.