River at SunRise

By Ortolan

A bears breakfast in droves down the river

I am the fish that gets thrown back
and dead just for being too small....by catch.

eternally, we can break it and then go back
and break it again...Yes

and what get's thrown back
still plenty of time then
oh yes you at land down under
in the summer, it can't be broken yet

I just woke up...oh I forget it
and I think it's actually by catch
just let me edit "good morning"
well that didnt translate well did it?

 will add more if one line isn't enough.
We made a poem without paying attention.
what poem?
a tad poisonous
and dont touch the tips
nest of ice
bird on an icebirg
and a dead seal skin

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Copyright 2015 Ortolan and Kinkifrog
Published on Saturday, March 7, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

thanks specter and kinkifrog for adding random words
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  • A former member wrote: The river of life.

  • Jessica Orr On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Jessica Orr (30)By person wrote:

    Brilliant and unique. The use of freedom and consequences of capture is exquisite. Just really good. Thank you.

  • Ortolan On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Ortolan (226)By person wrote:

    Thanks for reading.

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