Comments by All Members
- "Go down the shitta LOL, sometimes even a fighter can do nothing but watch. Welcome to DP, if ya need anything, im only a click away"
Posted by MissAngelic on "The Pacifist" by saltyman65
- "as though the first herald of Spring has whispered in your ear... I hear clear water , melting and trickling with promise ... just below the surface... I love this reminder of the opposite of my seasons..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "March, the month of promises" by saltyman65
- "I can see the feelings behind this writing, it is very good and reminds me a lot of myself. thank you for posting it"
Posted by Unknown on "Into the darkness " by saltyman65
- "Unmasked beauty right before all to see, and yet we're still blinded. The best works always go unnoticed...what a shame. Beautiful piece full of insight. Guess it's true then,, "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" unknown- bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "The simple things" by saltyman65
- "Nice metaphor in this one of time marching on...into oblivion...with only a utilitarian legacy, if there even is a legacy, that will eventually be dropped off at a Salvation Army...purchased for $5...the legacy of a lifetime. : ) Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Knitting" by saltyman65
- "Perfect anthem against the endless suburban sprawl! "with the power of Pine sol
so close to nature,
you can almost taste it!" - yup...so close you won't even miss the real nature once it is all cut down and ground into mulch... Great piece! I am off to read more! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "McLife" by saltyman65
- "irrespective of the transformation , the raw materials are still the same ; itchy , itchy wool ... as a metaphor , something akin to ' you can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear ' ( perhaps ) , but with a personal element of self inflicted , claustrophobic horror... ~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Knitting" by saltyman65
- "when I was tiny and we were camping at the beach , someone would always call out "there's a squall coming " and we would all run for the dunes. My brothers teased me and I thought The Squall was some kind of sea monster for a while there :P ... This is a very cool poem .Great atmosphere you've created with the imagery and format and what do you call that thing ... onomatopoeia ?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sea Squall" by saltyman65
- ""Breaking up,subtle,like a brick through a window"
A great opening line. Because there is nothing subtle about a break up. My relationship ended recently and it was painless. I was very numb to it. Although in my times of lonliness i do miss her. Your poem reminds me of that day in so many ways. I believe this is what it's all about, reaching and toughing others through words."
Posted by Unknown on "The Closure" by saltyman65
- "even real oldies, when they're good, still retain their feel and effect.... nicely done, old or not....a lot said and on point "
Posted by NikesRain on "The Closure" by saltyman65
- "I really like what you did with the format, it was unique and fun. The poem just slid right through everything to simply. It fit together so well. Great job! "
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Squall" by saltyman65
- "I love how you played with the format. Brilliant! The whole thing was an awesome ride from start to finish. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "Sea Squall" by saltyman65
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