Comments by All Members
- "Random work button for win! This was beautiful. The tone was held very well throughout the piece. Very whisper like, soft, compassionate. The way you wrapped up the ending was graceful as well. Kept me reading the entire piece, very well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "My Guardian Angel" by SilentHeart
- " Yea I feel that way sometimes too. There are days I don't mind, especially with diversions, but if I stop to think, I realize how lonely I am, and how all my relationships have become nothing more than acquaintanceships. I do believe everyone's life needs more than just that, but seem to have no idea how to go about it anymore, or even want to. For the most part, life consists of phases, and these times are yet another dark tunnel to pass through. Thanks for writing."
Posted by Patches on "I Am Invisible" by SilentHeart
- "One can feel your sorrow and sadness very clear.. I know those feelings very well too.. Remember, it can't rain all the time.. I hope you are getting better now.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Soul Turned to Ashes" by SilentHeart
- "This is such intense writing. Intensely describing the intensity of your suffering. This is sharp, hard, loud and very clear. I find it difficult to put extreme emotions into writing, even to just express them with words by talking. So for me, this seems quite an impressive accomplishment. Very well done! Your heart is not silent in these words but it's screaming and wailing ♡ I hope you are feeling better now. "
Posted by Cantara on "Soul Turned to Ashes" by SilentHeart
- "I really don't know what to say except I have felt evey word of this too. I think so many have and many are still going to. It hurts to lose a love but you know the saying:"better to have loved and lost than never feel love at all" don't close your heart forever♡"
Posted by Cantara on "Watching you Leave" by SilentHeart
- "This made me smile psychotically. That someone else.... someone who I don't know.... Feels the exact, EXACT same way I do. That this shit happens every day to different people and somehow for me that lessens the burden I'll be caring when he drives away in the end of May. I'll come home and read this and remember. Thank you."
Posted by Lux on "Watching you Leave" by SilentHeart
- "this is really cool, I always like how people interpret the angel of death. most see him as a killer of sorts, but few see him as the saddest angel of all. dealing in death everyday, every hour, every minute. he is there to take you to your final destination. but I like your take on it and I like how you threw the suicide card in it, and that last stanza in particular really sums it up almost like you beat him to the punch. I really liked it, its a great pen. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Come for me, Death" by SilentHeart
- "This piece left me in a very intrigued mood, it sounds like you're surrendering but you've already given all you got left and you're left with no choice but to give up. nicely written-Mrk "
Posted by Unknown on "Indestructible Enemies" by SilentHeart
- "I feel your pain here. I love the flow of this piece, and this is something that I , as well as many others can relate to... but what always kept me going was that there is always a new day which brings a new beginning. And I'm sure your not a monster! I wish you all the best and I hope to read more."
Posted by Unknown on "A Monster's Suicide" by SilentHeart
- "ohh the insanity I do love it. I can feel the decent. Thoughts turning into one another spiralling out of control until you have none left and you are a shell of what once was. glad to read more and im just a message away if you ever need anyone to talk to"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Somewhere in Between Reality and Dreams" by SilentHeart
- "I know exactly what this feels like... and all these dumb shallow people having no idea of the pain that someone is going through because they dont even know what pain means... it is these kind of shallow people that have the potential to create the most spiteful of misanthropes...great write"
Posted by Unknown on "How it Feels" by SilentHeart
- "wow about sums it up for me, I could give you this long critique about what a great work this is but "wow" seems to do it all...O"
Posted by Ophelia on "How it Feels" by SilentHeart
- "Very nice piece. tormented by the art,
painting is like that, but when completed the shackles do fall. very heavy duty work. Write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Artist's Canvas" by SilentHeart
- "The first tear you got from me was when she steps into the boat. The last stanza got a couple more. A very powerful write indeed miss SilentHeart, I will read more of your work. Excellent job on this one.........."
Posted by Peyton1 on "A Silent Wish" by SilentHeart
- "An awesome portrayal of a self abusive cutter. That isnt Dark, its a desease of the mind. She most have seen a certain unseen, it imprisoned her mind in forever torment, and her body to her is covered with evil ones, as if on a movie screen. Question to you though, who do you think won that battle? Her or them."
Posted by Unknown on "The Artist's Canvas" by SilentHeart
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