Comments by All Members
- "Friends that tell someone they look great when they are ill aren't friends at all. A true friend is the one that will tell you, you have a booger in your nose. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "raw beauty" by boundandfallen
- "I don't know. . . I kind of enjoy the raw, out-of-control, edge when something just flows out."
Posted by Unknown on "plan B" by boundandfallen
- "I must admit i agree with 1st comment. but i did enjoy reading this poem.
I could feel feelings that could of being expressed in this poem while being writen...i also like to write about not having control. but i could like to see more of your work ^^"
Posted by Shortnlethal on "plan B" by boundandfallen
- "i agree. it's what happens when one trys to write while being helped by jager.. lol. i'll probably rewrite it soon."
Posted by boundandfallen on "plan B" by boundandfallen
- "Great concept, but the flow was just lacking and the general overview was intimately lacking. I hope I'm not being too boldly critical; I'm only attempting to help."
Posted by CjPsychotic on "plan B" by boundandfallen
- "this hit me like a reflection you dont expect... i have felt all those things and cried all those tears as well..kindred sorrow.. you have the skill to use rhyme without overusing it and to use rhythm to complement your words. wonderfully done! "
Posted by Unknown on "a lonely girl" by boundandfallen
- "this piece is intriguing because so often people express that they want to do the things you say here that you will not and do not do...nicely done"
Posted by Northstar on "subterfuge" by boundandfallen
- "My favourite lines are "keyholes
just a little absense of matter
but they let in so much light
while hiding in the darkness of the doorway" - that gives me an interesting mental picture to ponder. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "keyholes" by boundandfallen
- "preaty good. I perfer capital I's but hey.. all english/americans I know dont use em.. wierdness.. :O) enyways.. it was kinda good. a somewhat unused metaphore of sorts.. *dances the I make no sense dance*"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "keyholes" by boundandfallen
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