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here i am
By boundandfallen
here i am
i'm all of me
and never who i used to be.
i want to tell you
what i think
and i see the crimson-
rusted sink
i see the mirror
broken in two
and i see the one
i am to you.
i thought i was more
but i don't act so good
i guess this is me
in my neck of the woods
i don't know your name
i would if i could
this is just me
in my neck of the woods
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Copyright 2004 boundandfallen
Published on Tuesday, April 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "here i am"
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A former member wrote:
Wow good, but in a sad way.
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, sixsixnine
(476)
wrote:
this is very coool! i like the flow & meaning behind it very nice*669*
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Nice job. After reading all your stuff, I only want more. I enjoyed this one just as much. Welcome to DP.
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, Blacken_Heart
(20) wrote:
I like it alot....good...it's sad
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A former member wrote:
beatiufl. i can relate. love this part:and i see the crimson-
rusted sink....very creative. congradulations.
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this is kinda cool, i like the style, and so here you are i look forward to reading more, great poem
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, boundandfallen
(32) wrote:
wow, thanx anth. you are one of my favorite poets here. i read your things constantly. i've read all of them and a couple more than once. do u like "subterfuge"?
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