the blood of your tears
By boundandfallen
i still can taste the flavor of your tears
all the salt we've cried away the years
all the pain that you have brought me near
i still can taste the flavor of your tears
i still remember everything you said
i still remember laying you to rest
i remember you taking your last breath
i still remember everyword you said
fuck the world and all its gray matter
fuck the gods for leaving my soul to shatter
fuck the sky for raining on your grave
and fuck the stars for taking you away.
i still recall the look in your eyes
when you knew that you were going to die
you screamed out loud, "god, please tell me why!"
you were gone to fast to barely start to cry
i still taste the blood of your tears
all the pain, we've cried away the years
all the hate that you have brought me near
i still can taste the flavor of your tears.
Comments on "the blood of your tears"
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful. i really like the 3rd verse. well done!
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
very nice work, I love how you express yourself here
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A former member wrote:
this is awesome. I love the 3rd stanza, great title also. nice work ~serpentine~
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
wow you got tears out of me it was so great. it reminds me of someone i lost long ago but still comes back it always does i guess this is a great poem. ~darlin :)
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
nice work, i like how you repeated the first lines to the last,great flow