subterfuge

By boundandfallen

i do not write of suiside
i do not write of pain
i do not cry at funerals
i do not show my shame

i do not want a lover who
will share with me all his mind
i do not want a kind of friend
who'd be with me for all time

i do not want to disturb you
i do not want to scream
i do not want to cut my skin
i do not want to beleive

i will not share my sympathy
i will not share my moods
i will not share my state of mind
i will not ever love you.

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Copyright 2004 boundandfallen
Published on Tuesday, April 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Northstar On Monday, August 9, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    this piece is intriguing because so often people express that they want to do the things you say here that you will not and do not do...nicely done

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    This was great. Stellar rhythem. I was really drawn in by the sheer rolling beat of the whole thing. And the content was excellent. Nice.

  • boundandfallen On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, boundandfallen (32)By person wrote:

    this is an anti-meaning ful poem. that's what subterfuge means. it was a vocab word this week. it's a kind of irony. you get it? haha. :D

  • Anth On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    lol yeah i got it, and liked, i have to say tho especially so from the 2nd stanza on, a terrific example of the subject brillaintly written

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