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an angry gray day, july 6-13, 2003
By boundandfallen
sleep will come eventually,
morning and night's become the same to me
when dawn and dusk appears the same,
something stirs within my brain
but insomnia and tainted thoughts
won't repress the pain i've brought
so who do i have to thank for this?
she, and love, a spiteful bliss
so, eventually sleep will come,
hopefully before grim reaper does
but anyway, what was i saying?
oh, sleep,
yeah, sleep,
i'll just keep on praying.
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Copyright 2004 boundandfallen
Published on Thursday, April 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "an angry gray day, july 6-13, 2003"
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On Thursday, January 25, 2018, Just Dave
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wrote:
Nice write. Insomnia can really take its toll. My dad has had extreme insomnia for years. Poor guy has to nap an hour at a time. JD
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
I loved your rhythem and composition in this piece. Great flow. And the message, I took to heart. Nice work.
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, boundandfallen
(32) wrote:
oh yeah, the history of this is funny. i was up for 7 days it felt like strate on coffe and caffeine, and i was watching the twilight marathon with my gma. i love it.
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed the short, quick tempo , and rhyme
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i like the flow and nature of this poem, the last few lines really went well with this , seemed fresh and fast in a way lol, great work
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