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  • "Wow very powerful words they spoke to me. I am going through something likes this in my life now and made me want to just cry my eyes out"
    Posted by Unknown on "Father's Day Lost" by Lifeless
  • "I like the rhyme and the lyric nature of this. ending fit well"
    Posted by steuss on "Her" by Lifeless
  • "who would take off their inhaler masks every so often to light one up. Even just a few months later I feel a lot better and am glad I made the choice but hey to each their own."
    Posted by Unknown on "Smoking (A Rant)" by Lifeless
  • "i haven't have a cigarette at the moment for nearly 18 hours and i feel fine. it's a choice i made, i just hoped peoplewould have the dignity to respect that. "
    Posted by serotonin lost on "Smoking (A Rant)" by Lifeless
  • "Your no loser I too have bitten into a shit sandwich. But after years my life is finally coming back together. For you I hope your life will get back togher and your shitty times will pass quickly."
    Posted by Ablebody Peckawood on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "my heart and prayers go out to you...i can only say that with each new day brings new prospects so dont give up, hope may be on the horizon ~kristy"
    Posted by Sin on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "for what it's worth, there is always hope in the uncertainty of the future. as easily as it can be bad, it can be good. noone can know whether tomorrow will hold something horrible or something magnificent -Jesse"
    Posted by Eladrim on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "i realize that in reality you probably won't kill yourself, but even by thinking about it you put yourself in danger of bad mentality for where you are. you're right, without hope life is even harder to complete. that's where you have to find it yourself."
    Posted by sIo on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "Reality…I'd probably dredge on. You realize without hope it's difficult. I also happen to be a coward…that feeling when the blood sugar drops dangerously, to me, is worse that any physical or emotional pain I’ve ever experienced."
    Posted by Lifeless on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "life is hard and there is no getting around that. you should know that, and i believe you do. life doesn't have a threshold. there's no breaking point at which you can say 'oh ok, too hard, i'm leaving'. you have to stick with it. you have to try. "
    Posted by sIo on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "this is what you've known for years, and this life is given to you once...you have eternity to spend it somewhere else. would you like it to be an eternity of regret and shame?"
    Posted by sIo on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "letting yourself die because you don't know how to go on, is not fair to yourself. can you honestly say if you died today you would be happier somewhere else? a new place....new surroundings...something much more unfamiliar to you than this life."
    Posted by sIo on "Release" by Lifeless
  • "cuase he had had a crush on me, like for a really long time. sick ppl!"
    Posted by Dei on "Her" by Lifeless
  • "wow. thats pretty crazy. Something similar happened to me once. well kinda. a guy that was a friend of mine slept wit hmy mom. and it was weird "
    Posted by Dei on "Her" by Lifeless
  • "ha haha i love the end.. its just like a hilarious slap in the face.. the beginning made me tear up but i ended up laughing.. or maybe it was both. good write anyway!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Her" by Lifeless
  • "i have to say, i loved the repetition of the last lines. really hit the reader hard. im breathless. nicely done."
    Posted by Twilight on "What happened?" by Lifeless
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