What happened?

By Lifeless

Something once stirred within my being
Overtaken by mundane obscurity
I've forgotten what it was
Darkness drapes a cloak of comfort about me
Shielding me from the world I learned to hate
Light no longer makes me smile...if it ever did
Loneliness now a welcome friend
Nothing hurts
Nothing hurts

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Published on Friday, April 16, 2004. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "What happened?"

A former member wrote: Nicely done but something... only dead fish don't move. SO keep your mind moving.
On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, purr_verse (1053) wrote:

very well-expressed; got me feeling the numbness completely. the cold echo repetition of the closure is very effective indeed. fine write.
On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

Short but strongly powerful .. this caught very muchly my attention
On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

wow, short but over-flowing with greatness, depth and meaning. wow. -MeL-
On Saturday, April 24, 2004, girlafraid (479) wrote:

there is something so awesome about the words "mundane obscurity"...it's complex, and it made me think...cool write man...
On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Agreed with capt. The feelings poured out through this. Simple, yes. But none the less good.
On Saturday, April 17, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

dig it ... a simple song .. felt the truth ... cool ... funguy