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Her
By Lifeless
What was...
I've touched her
Hugged her
My heart she captured
I've tickled her
Licked her
Made her my lover
I've kissed her
Caressed her
Need no other
I've spanked her
Tortured her
On her orders
I've beat her
Burned her
To give her pleasure
I've commanded her
Dominated her
Brought her rapture
I've fucked her
Loved her
She is my wonder
What is...
I call her
Need her
There is no answer
I stalk her
See her
She's with another
I tell her
Love her
It no longer matters
I see her
Watch her
I must still have her
To scorn her
Spite her
I fucked her mother
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© 2004 Lifeless
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, steuss
(92)
wrote:
I like the rhyme and the lyric nature of this. ending fit well
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On Friday, December 24, 2004, Dei
(665) wrote:
cuase he had had a crush on me, like for a really long time. sick ppl!
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On Friday, December 24, 2004, Dei
(665) wrote:
wow. thats pretty crazy. Something similar happened to me once. well kinda. a guy that was a friend of mine slept wit hmy mom. and it was weird
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A former member wrote:
ha haha i love the end.. its just like a hilarious slap in the face.. the beginning made me tear up but i ended up laughing.. or maybe it was both. good write anyway!
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A former member wrote:
dammit...ended smoothly? lol.
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
LOL this is hilarious i loved this ~ss
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i felt bad for you until i read the last stanza...then i smiled...very funny
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
ouch... the rhyme of this piece was rad... damn cool write. the ending was a bang. -MeL-
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Lol...this is really good. loved it, the ending was definitely unexpected. ~Tracy
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Wow. Intense. Good write. -Syn
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