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- "In a way the exact opposite of the poem we both commented on. Leaving me to be a selective hypocrite. But arent we all? -Tiger-"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "But that is realy how you read it; my eyes have trouple with the 3-4 line shift. The content of the poem is just fine, I loved following your track."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "The form used here, fail in the hands of many people. In my eyes you do not here. There could be a little playing with the ending of the lines while keeping them long still(the little break when read out loud)"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "the way you put it makes ya wanna cry for the child and jump in and save it! i love tthe way ya word stuff! ~!~Shivers~!` amazing work"
Posted by Unknown on "unloved child" by darkangelXlll
- "Light...Dark...Forever
Thats what I see in your writngs and I'll carry them with me always. Keep it dark. -Munkey-"
Posted by Munkey on "dark angel" by darkangelXlll
- "Every rose has it's thorns but it makes it no less beautiful. So I would say in the end it really doesn't metter but we had an ok time while it was burning down wouldn't you. ;) Keep it dark. -Chance-"
Posted by Munkey on "~till the hounds of hell~" by darkangelXlll
- "Life can bleed but pain does not, please never let your life bleed out. We only have a short time on this world and to let your life spill out is very,very sad. It's worst when a great writer is doing it. Keep it dark. -Chance-"
Posted by Munkey on "simple stroke" by darkangelXlll
- "To know thats somone no longer loves you is to die and lose a part of yourself.But if you love yourself... well then you can't lose what you always have with you. Never let it end and...Keep it dark. -Chance-"
Posted by Munkey on "to know you dont love me" by darkangelXlll
- "to hell with speeliing is right... writing isn't about how the words are are presented but the emotions that they convay. LOVE,HATE,PAIN,JOY!!!THATS WHAT WRITING IS ABOUT!!! And you my dear touch me with what you write. Keep it dark. -Chance-"
Posted by Munkey on "memory" by darkangelXlll
- "Oh to feel this way about someone again I would kill myself and walk back out of Hell itself to prove my love for that person. Beautiful...painfully so. -Munkey-"
Posted by Munkey on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "you have some hardcore feelings going on in all your writeings it makes fore some greeting reading thanks for sharing -Munkey-
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Posted by Munkey on ""life"" by darkangelXlll
- "Love or hate...I can't tell which...you meld emtions so well it is hard to tell the differance sometimes. Simpley breath taking -Munkey-"
Posted by Munkey on "kill her" by darkangelXlll
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