dark angel
By darkangelXlll
I was shattered teard and totally ripped apart
Put to the corner like an old rag doll
Had nothing but myself to trust and love
Left all alone without a friend in the world
Then send by someone or something I found you
Broken wings and as dark as midnight
As lonely as me and even as sad
You where all alone and afraid
Your wings where clipped your soul was sold your purity and charm was stold
from you
Your eyes where full of tears
They where beautiful and soon that would be taken away too
Your beauty was so pure and true it was any women’s dream
But you weren’t a women or even a human
You where an angel
That was lost
Lost in life
Death
And even on her way to heaven
You’ve been lost for so long
That’s its about time you’d find a home a place to live
and grow
You taught me about who I am
And soon your wings grew
And you where strong enough to once again soar off into the open sky
And leave this place you learned to love and call home
I just wanted to say
I love you
My saver
My heart
My hope
My admiration
My angel
My dark angel
Comments on "dark angel"
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A former member wrote:
so much beauty found in the sorrow...great write
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A former member wrote:
This rained on me...heavily, but through the downpour, there was a light...and I saw you kneeling before your savior of darkness, his arms cradling you with a dream-like tenderness...quite a lovely scene your words evoked...thank you.
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A former member wrote:
This is really beautiful
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
Light...Dark...Forever Thats what I see in your writngs and I'll carry them with me always. Keep it dark. -Munkey-
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A former member wrote:
very moving pure yet un pure dark with light i love it grea write ~Ends
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Beautiful Piece. Loved it. -Michael
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On Monday, July 26, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
now that i've come down from my trip two days ago just want to let you know .. this is very heart felt.. a great piece!
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
different from you,a superb write,i loved the idea in this and some great lines, one of your best
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A former member wrote:
I dont even know what to say...WOW...*DDP
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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
it's "torn"
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
fuck this is beautiful! fucking awesone ! on acid this is such a work of art! never stop! *669*
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A former member wrote:
this is a really good one. something i really would have wanted myself to write. trully well written. //ae
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, scorpionstale
(21) wrote:
Very nice, makes me think about events going on in my life, hoping that they turn around a little. And thanks for your feedback on my work, I've never had feedback before.
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A former member wrote:
wow..so much admiration for one person...seems darkness has a hold over one's soul and the ability to change it with ease...watch out for those whom wish to confuse then lead, you might run astray :) ~infinitum~