freeze time....

By darkangelXlll

you gave me a rose
you gave me hugs and kisses
you gave me a taste
of the sweetest temptation
you gave me hope
you gave me a reason to live

but once you left
you took it all with you
my hope
my wants
and my everything

you own me
and ill be forever yours

i desire you
i want you
i need you

what ever happened to
"baby i love you"

what ever happened
to all we had

it ended so quickly
it was like a fairytale
it was like a dream
i never wanted to wake from
but yet was forced back to reality
forced back to the misery
and pain of this life

i live in vain day by day
night by night
i always wish
you where by my side

that you come back to me
and that i could cuddle in your arms

i wish...

i wish i could freeze time
freeze time for you
freeze time for me my love.

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Published on Tuesday, March 30, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "freeze time...."

A former member wrote: I like th's!
On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

amazing write. I love it ~*~tart~*~
A former member wrote: I really liked this one...it drew to a wonderful close. Sweet sincerity. =)
On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Munkey (79) wrote:

So close to my herat it hurts. great write, and keep them coming. Keep it dark. -Chance-
On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Munkey (79) wrote:

*heart
On Saturday, July 24, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

fucking so much to relate to breaking thru feelings ! great write!
On Friday, April 2, 2004, Necromancer (71) wrote:

left speechless by the poem. *thinks angel for writeing so well. I love it all, it touched me. Thank you for being so good.~Justin
A former member wrote: great poem angel. sad. i really like your writing, you make me cry too. ~toxic
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, gracefullytorn (61) wrote:

whoa this is like three of my poems combined- great minds think alike good job
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

This was great. Just beautiful. Nice one. I really enjoyed this.
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

Yhe last stanza tied this together. ~ mw
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

This was good. I have been there before, but only to get hurt some more. -Morb
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, yslehc (334) wrote:

aw lovely write my friend.. and yay for the change in style.. though i do like bhoth ways, you're other way suits a lot of your work i think, good job!
A former member wrote: nice write i enjoyed this thoroughly.the ending was superb.*thumbs up*fil
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, pessum ire animus (57) wrote:

last lines summed it up well. i did enjoy this. and i agree with demon, the straightfowardness is a nice touch.