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kill her
By darkangelXlll
~ + ~Destroy her
tear her apart
open her up and expose her heart
let her blood flood the room
let her suffering take over
let everyone and everything hear her breath
hear her gasp for air that isn’t there
let her cry and her tears to be cherished
let her be broken
sacrifice her beauty and joy
let her die let her go ~ + ~
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Copyright 2004 darkangelXlll~darlin~
Published on Wednesday, June 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Why don't you tell us how you really feel lol. Nicely done :p ~Ship!
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, Munkey
(79)
wrote:
Love or hate...I can't tell which...you meld emtions so well it is hard to tell the differance sometimes. Simpley breath taking -Munkey-
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, sexually_sadistic
(378) wrote:
i agree with munkey, nevertheless an outstanding write! ~sex~
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
there are so many ways to describe...love...you know them all!
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
FUCKING SO MUCH TALENT ILOIVE YOUR SHIT! FUCVKING BEAUITOILPOBONHJCXB !*669*
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Intense..Great write. ..::Fairy::..
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Strong work.. So intense and passionate. I could deeply relate to the line "let her be broken".. That part particularly hit me hard. Awesome work, very dark.
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...sounds like some dreamt torture...kinda cool... -Stalker
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
superb work, thier was a strange feeling of a claustraphobic scene of watching something and having no control,as if a modern day coliseum,anyways, its great to see you back and with such a great work
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