my love

By darkangelXlll

As i slowly feel your hands touch me shivers go through my body i fill with joy and happiness i fill with love and at that momment everything and everyone is forgotten then your lips end up upon mine for those flicking seconds i just forget anything you've ever done anything pulling me back from your arms i love you and want you more than anything in this whole wide world my one and only love...

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Copyright 2004 darkangel13
Published on Saturday, March 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Sweetly poignant...emotrion at it's happiest...good write... Kya Scholar

  • A_Puppet_Show On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    The form used here, fail in the hands of many people. In my eyes you do not here. There could be a little playing with the ending of the lines while keeping them long still(the little break when read out loud)

  • A_Puppet_Show On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    But that is realy how you read it; my eyes have trouple with the 3-4 line shift. The content of the poem is just fine, I loved following your track.

  • A_Puppet_Show On Saturday, September 18, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    In a way the exact opposite of the poem we both commented on. Leaving me to be a selective hypocrite. But arent we all? -Tiger-

  • Munkey On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    Oh to feel this way about someone again I would kill myself and walk back out of Hell itself to prove my love for that person. Beautiful...painfully so. -Munkey-

  • sixsixnine On Monday, July 26, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    i read this again, & realized how much pain we can put ourselves thru when we love without control* great piece by the way i really can relate & like it alot*

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, July 24, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    FUCK IT FEELS LIKE READING THE SPILL OF SOMEONe wHO DOESn'T CARE TO FEEL. SO BEAUTIFULLY UNREAL! *669*

  • A former member wrote: it hurts so much when the one we love can't help but hurting us...no matter how hard we try, our twist for right always turning to wrong, i like the dynamics in this once readin a bbit deeper

  • Necromancer On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Necromancer (71)By person wrote:

    i wish someone would love me that much. ::cries:: I love it. ~Justin

  • A former member wrote: I've been there but in the end nothing works out. Every thing you've or hes forgotton about that you or he did always comes back to bite you in the ass.

  • A former member wrote: again...another kick ass poem by you!

  • A former member wrote: these few lines are just amazingly simple yet so complicated. this i can really relate to. im sadened by this yet joyful. great as always

  • A former member wrote: Passionate and heartfelt. It makes me smile.

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