Comments by All Members
- "Strikingly vivid. It's a scene that is replaying over and over again in my head. The look in her eyes, saying so much, yet not saying anything. It's almost creepy how well i can visualize this."
Posted by wilted on "fragile angel (with aegis)" by darkangelXlll
- "All I can say is moving. absolutly powerfull emotion, and feeling that it jus seems to rip out of the reader"
Posted by Spyral on "unloved child" by darkangelXlll
- "although I don't envy you for what got you to write this, I do envy you for your ability to write those emotions down. vey good write"
Posted by Unknown on "slowly killing me" by darkangelXlll
- "This rained on me...heavily, but through the downpour, there was a light...and I saw you kneeling before your savior of darkness, his arms cradling you with a dream-like tenderness...quite a lovely scene your words evoked...thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "dark angel" by darkangelXlll
- "Original and well-portrayed...you hold your reader captive from start to end...I see progression in all of your writes."
Posted by Unknown on ""life"" by darkangelXlll
- "Your works are so incredibly powerful...they evoke so many emotions in your readers, as is evident by the comments you have already received...my only suggestion is to improve your titles a bit to draw the reader in... =)"
Posted by Unknown on "unloved child" by darkangelXlll
- "...wrapped around itself nicely...a sweetly woven collaboration...I believe it needs a stronger title, however, that might draw more attention to it. It's always nice to see your work, Darlin."
Posted by Unknown on ""Fallen Angels" *with munkey*" by darkangelXlll
- "I dislike them befor reading them, and the more you's the worse for me. Still it seemed real enough. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on ""you"" by darkangelXlll
- "I do not find it boring, neither do I stand intrigued like I did with an ealier writing of yours. But you should choose not to listen to me when I comment on "you poems""
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on ""you"" by darkangelXlll
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