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"i love anything involving ghostly shipwreck reveries cos it makes for such wicked imagery. 'Her ribbon clenched in his fist'/'he kept her eyes in his bag..' awesome visions..wonderfully told."
Posted by Unknown on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"I enjoy your work and really liked this one. You put words together beautifully. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"wonderful."
Posted by Moonflower on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"The neverending truth of moaning.. *Sighs* You wrote this well dude. raly well.. "
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "The Waves Whispered What You Are" by Bella Butchery

"wow. you left off making me want to hear more... truely amazing *messenger"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "sex with a bullet proof vest on" by Bella Butchery

"Magnificant. Complexity dancing arount one simple subject. Brilliant."
Posted by Trigger on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"This work demands comments.. so here is my one comment. Love the word build and a few lasting lines in a downwards pyramid.. whatever you desire, words on fire.. I dont know.. *blinks and dances off*"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"Wow.. very unique.. Love this!!"
Posted by Eric on "Un Embrasser Au Cemetary, Ma Petite étoile" by Bella Butchery

"I didn't realize this was you...Cloud. sheeshhhhhh I am losing it. lol! "
Posted by Mylissa on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"your such a good writer... this is my favorite work from you... well done *messenger"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "Eternity Was On Our Lips" by Bella Butchery

"Wonderful...dont know what else to say.Loved the ending."
Posted by BeautifullyRuined on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

""you say my imagery is perfect symmetry"honie your imagery is beyond perfect...loved this."
Posted by BeautifullyRuined on "Anablephobia and The Faded Stars Between Us" by Bella Butchery

"this was totally good shit, man. i didn't like your use of the word 'tenderloin' but other than that it was immaculate. have a good one, brother"
Posted by Sepulcrawl on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"good thing i found you. i loved this piece. lengthy, filled with complexity that sounds so clear. awesome! -l- "
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"Damn this is powerful! I felt every word unfold a very familiar feel one that for the first time I enjoyed. Thank u. *669*"
Posted by sixsixnine on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"It was as if I were hovering above, watching everything play out. This was astounding in the word choice, twisted in its meanings, yet beautiful beyond words that I could ever praise it to be."
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"I felt as if I was dancing naked on a stage, a stripper who didn't mean what she used to mean to the world when she was an innocent child. Heartbreaking. You are 100 percent pure tallent"
Posted by Army Barbie on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"What can I say that hasn't already been said? The last few lines were kick ass...but on a whole it was just..."
Posted by Army Barbie on "blackhaired beauty" by Bella Butchery

"I see a lot of angles here, mainly the use of self-induced abuse. Much love and respect, keep the masses feeling uneasy about themselves and you'll find you're 10 steps ahead."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "sex with a bullet proof vest on" by Bella Butchery

"So descriptive and full of passion. I love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "blackhaired beauty" by Bella Butchery

"... And your ending is quite powerful. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

""An electric chrono-counter culture/Time moved an inch to take the sun away/And the city blankets a digital placenta…" Love your symmetrical style, and really dig the concept of this piece; that cyberpunk/SpaceNoir feel - the vivid imagery: ..."
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"..."Neon sidewalks and skyscrapers ". The *I _o_e _ou* stanza is extremely clever, witty & effective (like Matrix data dripping down a vid-sceen). "drowning/ will be the last thing we remember" is an extremely beautiful/sad expression. ..."
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"Your words are tiny needles shoved under my skin.. you leave me stinging. amazing.. profound.. "how long has it been since you were alive" I think this killed every part of me.. "
Posted by Disassembly Boy on "sex with a bullet proof vest on" by Bella Butchery

"lonley ambient city angst,and the smell of my vinyl collection that holds so much stained history.. i drink this deep"
Posted by Tonights Decision on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"Lovely write- written very beautifully. (BUT i do think u should change your name back to Just shoot.. just an opinion) you write wicked poems."
Posted by prettydisgrace on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

"Wow..all the little details you express from one line to the next, and the overall truth.......devastating. My head's still rocking from the blows. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Waves Whispered What You Are" by Bella Butchery

"I read this a few times before I commented on it, this work seems to hit me and causes me to think deeply about ... well about my past mostly well done"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

""Eyes that mist a translucent haze While thoughts prove a hateful gaze" your poetry always astounds me..and the ending of this was outstanding. brilliant."
Posted by Unknown on "Vinyl Nightscapes and What You Meant To Me" by Bella Butchery

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