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Eternity Was On Our Lips
By Bella Butchery
Can I wake to see you in a blur
Or hide in the depths of your heart
Sleep : : Dream
Dream : : Sleep
Ripped tenants
Ache to walk again
While
White noise tides
And flutters my lids
To remember
A forgotten fragment
Of a shallow kiss
A hallow vessel
Floating through notes and tempos
Or maybe promises
That were simply trivial
Ripped tenants
Ache to walk again
As soon as you came
Is as quickly as you left
And when stars caught my eye
Silence beat its wings
When I looked up to embrace
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© 2007 just shoot me in the face
Published on Tuesday, January 16, 2007.
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Comments on "Eternity Was On Our Lips"
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A former member wrote:
Awesome write
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392)
wrote:
Wow! Beautiful. . .
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On Thursday, February 7, 2008, italianbella
(183) wrote:
amazing write this was beautiful:)
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On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
I've read a lot of your works but I never seem to be able to put into words how much I like them. I loved this one, I just wish I knew how to say it better.
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
your such a good writer... this is my favorite work from you... well done *messenger
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A former member wrote:
Gah Damn...
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A former member wrote:
you're magical. :)
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A former member wrote:
"While
White noise tides
And flutters my lids /Floating through notes and tempos" Yes, the notes & tempos, your rhythm as seductive & slow as eternity upon the lips you beat into wings. This is a poetic embrace, nicely crafted.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
speechless. You are so brilliant with your words. I love this.
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
'silence beats its wings..when i looked up to embrace' perfect ending..
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On Thursday, January 25, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
This was absolutely gorgeous.."A forgotten fragment/Of a shallow kiss/A hallow vessel/Floating through notes and tempos"..and the lead up to the ending and the ending itself were magnificent..Write on, Brother..
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On Thursday, January 25, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
I need to read you more...
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On Wednesday, January 24, 2007, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
very nice work. So sad so good. I love the last too lines...
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On Wednesday, January 24, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
sad yet captivating... well done
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A former member wrote:
very impressive. nice work as always. ~ red.
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A former member wrote:
I felt warmth while reading this. Like A silent smile coming from your face when you saw your love. It gave me a gentle happiness. Kudos ][ ][
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On Friday, January 19, 2007, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
its like the words were captured and trapped inside me.......i have no clue what to say...simpley,....wow....beautiful....you are amazing, really ~*dani*~
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On Thursday, January 18, 2007, Infinity Rising
(2) wrote:
Very beautiful words... sad and mysterious. Excellent write!
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, verablue
(106) wrote:
"Can I wake to see you in a blur" "White noise tides" fanfuckingtastic! also, i must agree with midnight seraphim about the title.
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
I like the last two lines...and feel that kind of wondering. And wonder if I am the other, that others wonder about.
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This was just timeless and beautiful..*sighs softly* My heart was captured between the words and it was pumped with imagination and beauty.. You my friend are stunning~Mirrrored
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A former member wrote:
I don't even know what to say. Your beauty amazes me and your mystifying talent consumes me. You are most assured one of my favorites.
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
those first two lines were so beautiful and the rest of the poem left me with a dull ache and a sadness that tasted of nostalgia..wonderful write ~kristy
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
btw the title alone was exquisite ;)
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