Comments by All Members
- "Damn.. I'm in shock. I can only echo Clam.. Exquisite descriptions, metaphors.. you've just done such a perfect job with this.. beauty at it's most bittersweet."
Posted by Lynaes on "Red.butterflies (with Emi)" by FindAgentX
- "ohhh...i simply have no words to say..you've stunned me into speechless-ness and complete awe...your works are light in my tunnel...i'm throughly a*maze///*ed"
Posted by AniDayz on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- "damn it...why haven't i had the pleasure of stumbling upon your wonderous works before now???!!!i'm intoxicated by each and every p8iece of your's i have read...*skips off to read MORE*"
Posted by AniDayz on "sp/lit-decision" by FindAgentX
- ""her hands fluttered like birds". . . damn, this hurt. ripped my heart out. . completely and scratched at it with jagged nails. AMAZING work on this one, i'm completely feeling this. . pain. . "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on ".l.i.e.s." by FindAgentX
- ""Red butterflies splattered upon the wall
cold steel kissing pale skin". . the pictures I am getting from this are incredibly real. . the ending. WHOA, great job on that. "she didnt know she would have such precision in breaking her own heart". . *faves"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Red.butterflies (with Emi)" by FindAgentX
- " "ignoring the words but basking in the sound of her voice.". . .damn this is a really great piece. this emptiness is very familiar, detached in a way. nicely done
"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- ""and leave you to your forgetting".. . well, I really liked this. it was simple. . but oh so strong, captivated and burned me. . breathing machine. . hmm, I'm getting something strange out of this. . too many thoughts at once. great work :)"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "breathing machine" by FindAgentX
- "i think this kind of kicked me in the face... more rather crushed my skull with a baseball bat. it's when you go back and think things over. when you decide you're life is nothing.deceased."
Posted by Unknown on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- "very well written - loved the freedom of the poem contrasting the structure of your character..."now I'm kicking tin cans in the empty parking lot of my head"
...very nice - josh"
Posted by Revolting Theatre on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- "So easy to fall in love with the beauty, the shinyness of the Rolex watch.. you're too taken with it to realise it's a rip off, or doesn't work, doesn't fit etc... awesome work"
Posted by Lynaes on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- ""sitting beside her, ignoring the words but basking in the sound of her voice." ..in love with the idea of it, rather than what it all means.. what entails, what it consists of.."
Posted by Lynaes on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- "I think this is a beautiful expression of how being infatuated with a person consumes you completely. Your world is inside yourself, in your head.. then you lose it and it's a serious case of "where the fuck am I?" Very impressive work, for sure."
Posted by Lynaes on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- "this one has got me thinking. something is blocking a direct comment. a few words that say how i feel...all i find myself thinking is how incredibly well you described this. impressive."
Posted by Twilight on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
- ""..drowning in air. " that line is fucking incredible. your making abusive love to my heart, and im loving every scond of it. tragically alluring."
Posted by Twilight on ".l.i.e.s." by FindAgentX
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