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the things you said last night
By FindAgentX
slowly fucking myself (up)
slowly fucking myself (over)
why can't i just erase this?
stop(rewind)re-record(OVER!)
but nothing can be easy anymore
i cannot erase this
the worst part is
(is that it's my fault
my fault)
is that i didn't enjoy it
(not really)
you didn't mean it
(not one word)
the things you said last night
and the sad part was
that i knew it
(way before you opened
your fucking mouth)
and i could feel myself
digging my own goddamn grave
.But i did it anyway.
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Copyright 2004 FindAgentX
Published on Sunday, July 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "the things you said last night"
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A former member wrote:
ive been here before with so many people....i love this way you wrote this its truely memorable i enjoyed reading it
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791)
wrote:
wow... i always get the feeling that i've been there before
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"but i did it anyway". . I'm not sure what I get out of it, but I liked the raw energy that flooded out at my mind. nicely written
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
nice--I really enjoy your expression of the battle with self and others--being able to recognize what's real and still not act on it --hmmm this is a raw, honest piece, nicely done.
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