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sp/lit-decision
By FindAgentX
so many choices(voices)
running through my head
live or die(alive or dead)
running faster(standing still)
waiting at my window sill
waiting for someone to care
so many feelings(none i can share)
hating living(afraid to die)
afraid of heights(wanting to fly)
trying to comprehend(nothing makes sense)
it's a wonder how this boring tale keeps me in suspense.
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Copyright 2004 FindAgentX
Published on Sunday, July 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791)
wrote:
wonderful, very lyrical.. interesting dichotomy
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A former member wrote:
Interesting piece my friend. . . Keep up the good work.
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
damn it...why haven't i had the pleasure of stumbling upon your wonderous works before now???!!!i'm intoxicated by each and every p8iece of your's i have read...*skips off to read MORE*
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
wow, powerful rhymes. loved your last line. . nicely done
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A former member wrote:
dude, the rhymes were good and even with all the contradictions your point was very clear
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A former member wrote:
heh nice peice, like violet the contradictions here make me think, although i disagree with her on the split-personality, i would rather call it conflicting emotions, but anyway, great write.
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, FindAgentX
(31) wrote:
yeah...see what happens when i rhyme?
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