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breathing machine
By FindAgentX
i won't be here to pick up the pieces
just keep that in mind.
and when i leave i'll take a tiny little part of you with me.
and i hope you feel empty without it.
i hope it burns.
i'll pull the plug of your breathing machine
and leave you to your
forgetting.
goodbye.
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Copyright 2004 FindAgentX
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791)
wrote:
ohh, my, quite strong... in many ways the three years that i was actively involved with raven i was her life support... and when i thought she was done with me for the last time (yeah right) i was relieved because i would not be the one getting "the call" so i could survive past her, simply by not knowing
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
firce concept........deep.......i like.........urban
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A former member wrote:
amazing.
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A former member wrote:
well this hit home in a way i never thought it could again...nice write!
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Yes I agree. Breathing machine.... it's an interesting concept. Nice write
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"and leave you to your forgetting".. . well, I really liked this. it was simple. . but oh so strong, captivated and burned me. . breathing machine. . hmm, I'm getting something strange out of this. . too many thoughts at once. great work :)
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