Comments by All Members
- "This piece started a little shakey for me, but got better and better as I read on. I'm not sure how many meanings this poem has, but I can tell there's definately more than one."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "The Last Page" by Invader Lyn
- "reminds me of a fire i had... my pages danced with leaves, my thought evaporated into air... that was it. gone. i like it... good write, nice form,(at first i feared this was going to be a suicide note from the title, never know what to expect...) Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Last Page" by Invader Lyn
- "I especially like the lines, "burn through bridges without a scratch
deny everything that would make you happy
so you finally feel exactly as I do". Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "paper cut" by Invader Lyn
- "you're really good with finishing poems off... I wish I could make good endings like you do. i like the meaning behind this poem a lot, too.."
Posted by Skye on "Still-born" by Invader Lyn
- "Yup. Another great flow. The way you word things to make the rhyme is superb. Well done stellar."
Posted by Skye on "Beauty" by Invader Lyn
- "*The scared soul frees itself and on bright wings seeks its mighty destiny* Hate is pitiful in its uselessness but for excuse, sorrow an empty rope to hold on to, sometimes its the only rope left...The abyss glares...I fare thee well..."
Posted by Solace on "happiness is hopelessness" by Invader Lyn
- "An imagery of norm, simplicity wrapped in toxicity, a type of surrealist vision shrouded by a reality that is all too bleak...*I am the evidence*
Sunlight fades, eyes grow heavy..."
Posted by Solace on "happiness is hopelessness" by Invader Lyn
- "*Be still for a moment everything depends upon you, if you die i will die too...* Beauty poignant and epitomised by an emptiness *drained* sucked dry of all emotions"
Posted by Solace on "happiness is hopelessness" by Invader Lyn
- "_very sad...and pure.with a resigned intensity...this poem fuses the styles of the old stellar with the style of newer stellar turned purple perfectly.i hope i make sense.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Still-born" by Invader Lyn
- "very dark. remnants of past thoughts...memories to be forgotten but always there in your mind. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Still-born" by Invader Lyn
- "your writing changed dramatically overnight. im impressed as hell and overwhlemed to the extreme.your mind...is so dynamic. mysterious. awesome...just awesome"
Posted by Twilight on "like it's already gone" by Invader Lyn
- "I really liked the flow of this piece and the overwhelming grip it had that just pulled you in and made it you...nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "of the unknown" by Invader Lyn
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