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Still-born
By Invader Lyn
arms in the air
take your blank stare
never really there
to this we don't care
I give up now, what's the use in trying
what we had before is obviously dying
I've had enough of all my senseless crying
a promise from you is just you lying
I've asked but you don't answer me
I want something that will never be
I'm next to you but you don't even see
I locked my heart and you destroyed the key
did I do something to you to deserve what I got
to be lifted by a lie just as soon to be dropped
look at my face and tell me you forgot
show me I was stupid for loving what I sought
turn away
another day
for this I pay
this macabre play
deserved this
for feelings missed
another blacklist
for the nothing I kissed
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Copyright 2004 Write It Purple
Published on Tuesday, March 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Still-born"
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A former member wrote:
a promise from you is just you lying
I've asked but you don't answer me
I want something that will never be
I'm next to you but you don't even see
I locked my heart and you destroyed the key best parts i crawled inside those and died
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A former member wrote:
I want to put this to music...heavy, dirty, screaming music. It'd fit methinks. -END-
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52)
wrote:
Amazing piece of work. I was floored when I was done reading. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
a very sad piece indeed. has a real sense of final melancholy coldness to it. *sends hug*
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
wow i can really relate to that a lot i like it nice write. ~darlin
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
oh dark indeed, i love it.~~~Grave
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