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Beauty
By Invader Lyn
musical notes laced with soft flames
tells of a story with an abundance of names
this midnight sky wouldn't lie when it said
your heart was held tight and for him it was bled
happens to all but it happens to one
so when it found you it sought to stun
turns a voice into truth that settles upon ledges
of the cliffs of your soul with the softest of edges
induced by the death of previous mistrusts
arms are left open not expected to rust
a door found too stubborn is finally shattered
the remnants of doubt left trampled and tattered
the breath from another breathes life into you
revitalized in colors of the warmest hue
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Copyright 2004 Stellar
Published on Friday, March 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Beauty"
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On Friday, June 22, 2012, prodigy789
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wrote:
I love this. Possibly the best and most close to home thing ive read yet. Thank you for the pleasure!
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A former member wrote:
Reading this was an undeniable pleasure. I seemed to luxuriate in the rich and utterly absorbing imagery, yet could not evade the mesmerising but woeful emotion. Absolutely wonderful. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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A former member wrote:
Everything about this is perfect. No words can say what this hasn't already. -END-
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I agree with Prophet. This has amazing flow. Your just a great writer. This proves it even more so.
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"musical notes laced with soft flames tells of a story with an abundance of names", absolutely gorgeous. ~L
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Just bursting with wonderful metaphors and symbolism. Great job.
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
...............*speechless*
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A former member wrote:
B.E.A Utiful flow. Rhyme again well doen, the story touching, with a nice paced progression. +T.P.U+
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