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like it's already gone
By Invader Lyn
the stars from your eyes fell to the ground
swept from the sky without making a sound
as we weave secrets into the night air
I wonder contently if you're really there
each kiss a rogue match struck against a rough lip
swallowed inside me to your gasoline I sip
if you left to go seek out the promise of tomorrow
I'd die to stop you in your tracks, the time I'd try to borrow
attachments torn so deeply through, at last you finally see
these tears convict each passing feeling of what you mean to me
and if you kissed my tears away with your hopeful lovelorn song
this elation I'd still succumb to, but to me
it's already gone
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Copyright 2004 Write It Purple
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2004.
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On Sunday, November 13, 2005, Thorn
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wrote:
My God, that is incredibly beautiful. Every line is so alive with tragic imagery... I'm blown away...
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A former member wrote:
Once again, like a truck to the face, a perfectly executed monologue of emotion that leaves the reader feeling...stunned. -END-
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
ohhhhhh...so sad, so lovely. Well done sweet thing. Fox
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Loserland
(113) wrote:
two thumbs ...human emotion is so crazy and complicated
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
I thought this was an interesting line "each kiss a rogue match struck against a rough lip". The ending slapped me. Good stuff. :::OLd
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