Comments by All Members
- "You are ozone , a three element molecule that is unbalanced , a one in 10 million . Disbursed between heaven and earth . Unaffectionately going about your business of protecting earth . Clear , unseen , is your disguise but necessary for life ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Bitter Angel" by Invader Lyn
- "I love this. Possibly the best and most close to home thing ive read yet. Thank you for the pleasure!"
Posted by prodigy789 on "Beauty" by Invader Lyn
- "Oh my wow.....Umm I really didn't know how else to put it...from one eroticist to another...very nicely put
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Bloth"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "Heat Exhaustion" by Invader Lyn
- "Wow...such vivid descriptions...the first stanza is a poem itself...sets the pace and pushes this piece into immediate overdrive.Thank you,Sarilyn.You never let me down."
Posted by suicideseason on "Pacify" by Invader Lyn
- "Great write! Some fantastic imagery woven throughout, and I liked the entire 'feel' of the piece... both quietly and overtly on the edge... Excellent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Pacify" by Invader Lyn
- "Ahh, Sarilyn...it was definitely worth the wait...strong and illustrative...just wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "Pacify" by Invader Lyn
- "I totally agree with the statement your trying to get across... and also u used my favorite word.. pacify"
Posted by ilovemetal on "Pacify" by Invader Lyn
- "first thing=>i agree with Choronzon very beautiful, second=> my fave lines, "sparkling distractions wink their charm," "leaves rain down the whispers of my childhood""
Posted by Jewelnique on "Wish" by Invader Lyn
- "Beautiful poem, Saralyn. The second stanza ruled the most. Awesome work, bud, and Tim's right."
Posted by Choronzon on "Wish" by Invader Lyn
- "I miss you posting new stuff all the time...you're one of my favorites here.*sighs and remembers the good old days*"
Posted by suicideseason on "Wish" by Invader Lyn
- "This is illustrious and just brilliant. I've missed your works, Sarilyn. Glad to you see you posting again."
Posted by Unknown on "Wish" by Invader Lyn
- "Beautiful work ~ "little assumptions covered in vague lies false sympathetics look to me with codeine eyes trapped in a bed with pure white sheets harbor death, paralyze, to the machine beat" This stanza in particular captivated me. This is absoloutley pr"
Posted by Unknown on "of the unknown" by Invader Lyn
- "_i can't believe i let this slip past me...it lives up to what i expect from you,Sarilyn...that no nonsense feel,the powerful drive...and moving as always.lovely,Sarilyn."
Posted by suicideseason on "Inside Ghetto Walls" by Invader Lyn
- "Reading this was an undeniable pleasure. I seemed to luxuriate in the rich and utterly absorbing imagery, yet could not evade the mesmerising but woeful emotion. Absolutely wonderful. ~*~ Rose ~*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty" by Invader Lyn
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