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Heat Exhaustion
By Invader Lyn
combative kindling, lips flicker blue
eyes and embers reveal the same
I've destroyed entire forests for you
since the first time you set me aflame
please don't touch me
I can't take your heat
will you have me
I'm skipping beats
our breath together is melodic
I time to the rhythm of your skin
your fingertips burn portraits on my flesh
you engulf me over and over again
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Copyright 2004 PurpleStellar
Published on Thursday, July 1, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Heat Exhaustion"
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163)
wrote:
Oh my wow.....Umm I really didn't know how else to put it...from one eroticist to another...very nicely put ;}= Bloth
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A former member wrote:
i love it! that is so awesome!
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
god, that was so smoothly written, and passionate, YOU'RE BACK! *hugs* Beautiful piece. *~seraph~*
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On Saturday, July 3, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
smooth at the switch and intense thoughout. nicely done indeed.
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
The intensity of this was delicious, gorgeous, passionate descriptions. such an atmosphere you've created.. I agree with purr, those lines are absolutely wonderful. Awesome work.
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
gorgeous little pocket of passion! i love the last two lines in the first stanza especially. :)
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
intense write, well-written. -MeL-
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On Thursday, July 1, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
err.. uhh..yeah.. mm.. well, that was tasty. I love the first and last verse.. intensely passionate. :::OLd
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