Comments by All Members
- "It's incredibly difficult to comment on- I can see why Kerry has you favored. It's not so much the format but the concept and metaphor that make you two kindered spirits. Well written, whim or not, it seems polished and well developed. Keep it."
Posted by Maladroit on "Torn. " by the Id
- "i like the relationship this has with skin. i cant handle weak people, but this puts it into a whole other perspective. "
Posted by dramamine on "Torn. " by the Id
- "This was pretty cool..some nice twists and turns that kept me on my toes. You should keep."
Posted by mastadave2999 on "Torn. " by the Id
- "The passion between the two of you writing this is astonishing. I love it. Makes for a great write. (: "
Posted by Star on "Tensity. - with Evil" by the Id
- "This seems to rattle like unspoken words in my head. Tension, maybe sadness...some sort of resignation...its confusing, because there are two definite and well defined views in this...and they seem to clash bitterly. It begs for a deeper look, really. Well done you dorks"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Tensity. - with Evil" by the Id
- "I enjoyed this very much. Me thinks new favorite.... Sums up a lot of how I've been feeling. Well done, you two!"
Posted by Lux on "Tensity. - with Evil" by the Id
- "I filled your body with my soul ... thats so sexy and beautiful "
Posted by Unknown on "Tantric." by the Id
- "I'm a big fan of the letter T. Go ahead... try to write without it. I'll wait here until you're done. Alliteration is an addiction. Good piece, Id. "
Posted by Unknown on "Truth. " by the Id
- "sounds like it was a challenge laid down for you...well met ... you carried it off with ease...you could probably do it blindfolded with one hand tied behind your back..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Truth. " by the Id
- "always love what you can do with alliteration, great example.."
Posted by Unknown on "Truth. " by the Id
- "Alliteration is always hard for me...so when people kill it, i'm usually in awe. well done Sir xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Truth. " by the Id
- "Alliteration is one of my favorite things. Keeping the t theme going. I dig it"
Posted by dramamine on "Truth. " by the Id
- "shit! that's harsh, but i love the venom! another rocking write! keep 'em flowing."
Posted by natalie on "Talk." by the Id
- "oh hell yes!!! i feel this and it hurt to read! well pieced my friend...well done indeed!"
Posted by natalie on "Tantric." by the Id
- "what an entrance!! i simply adore nature and poetry with metaphors using nature to get the point across!!! this was awesome!!welcome to dp!"
Posted by natalie on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "short but effective, sometimes less is more, good write, liked it"
Posted by Unknown on "Talk." by the Id
- ""Lightning shocks iris sizzling cheek bones and dental thunder cracks" ouch!! Killer write ;)~ "
Posted by blue angel on "Tantrums." by the Id
- "Ahh, yes...it can be quite exhausting! Awesome write. Welcome to DP :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Talk." by the Id
- ""Though I never really fed you deceit like silver spoon cradled candies
I just knew you weren’t worth the copper-penny-truth.
" Ahh... i love this.... Nicely done Sir xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Talk." by the Id
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