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Talk.
By the Id
It’s cheap, but I somehow still feel cheated.
The Bargain Brand syllables you whined relentlessly into me
Filling me till frustration foamed from my lips like rabies.
It’s the lies. You see, I find them exhausting.
Though I never really fed you deceit like silver spoon cradled candies
I just knew you weren’t worth the copper-penny-truth.
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Copyright 2013 the Id
Published on Tuesday, July 30, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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A former member wrote:
short but effective, sometimes less is more, good write, liked it
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On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Deathkitten
(571)
wrote:
Ahh, yes...it can be quite exhausting! Awesome write. Welcome to DP :)
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On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(332) wrote:
"Though I never really fed you deceit like silver spoon cradled candies I just knew you weren’t worth the copper-penny-truth. " Ahh... i love this.... Nicely done Sir xoxo
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On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
That kind of silence is golden ;)~ I like your style...
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