Talk.

By the Id

 
It’s cheap, but I somehow still feel cheated.
The Bargain Brand syllables you whined relentlessly into me
Filling me till frustration foamed from my lips like rabies.
It’s the lies. You see, I find them exhausting.
Though I never really fed you deceit like silver spoon cradled candies
I just knew you weren’t worth the copper-penny-truth.
 

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Copyright 2013 the Id
Published on Tuesday, July 30, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: short but effective, sometimes less is more, good write, liked it

  • Deathkitten On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Ahh, yes...it can be quite exhausting! Awesome write. Welcome to DP :)

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (333)By person wrote:

    "Though I never really fed you deceit like silver spoon cradled candies I just knew you weren’t worth the copper-penny-truth. " Ahh... i love this.... Nicely done Sir xoxo

  • blue angel On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, blue angel (869)By person wrote:

    That kind of silence is golden ;)~ I like your style...

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