Comments by All Members
- "I can feel the gravity and inertia of what you're saying as I read that.
Shorter is impactful as your poem proves."
Posted by DKultra on "As I am born" by ONEANDLONELY
- "Very nicely done. I found sorrow in this for me, if my soulmate had a daughter that wouldn't be mine, I think I would lose it for a while. Well penned, anyhow. "
Posted by Unknown on "Reunion" by ONEANDLONELY
- "8 years after you posted this and it still takes my breath away; still sweeps me off my feet and makes my heart flutter. I FUCKING MISS YOU"
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Two Roses" by ONEANDLONELY
- "Aw! This is so beautiful!! You know, the ryhthm for this is almost songlike but it has that hint of difference that screams "I"M A POEM" :D I really like this! It is great!"
Posted by Unknown on "Mom" by ONEANDLONELY
- "I admire your tasteful views on social commentary! This would make an excellent song, but despite that it was a truly memorable write! Lovely!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "The Heist" by ONEANDLONELY
- "this is beautiful......and powerful, i really like this, i really hope you can have this....."
Posted by vaultgrl on "Mom" by ONEANDLONELY
- "ooo...i loved this :) it brought a smiel to my face and made me pull my sweater over my shoulders. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "As I am born" by ONEANDLONELY
- "lol i liked this!....you're poetry blossomed while I wasn't looking. *smiles* I'm glad. You needed it."
Posted by Unknown on "Pixel Love" by ONEANDLONELY
- "DIS PIECE IZ HOT AZZ DA STOVE ON, IT'S MADD DEEP N YES DIS IZ g=CAPS OUT OF SPITE TURN DA CONTRAST N BRYTNESS UOF LIL PUSSY'Z-PERSEVERANCE-"
Posted by Unknown on "HE STILL SINGS" by ONEANDLONELY
- "man people always, always say some stupid shit "Ohh the caps my eyes" fist up PANTHER fuck deez dickheadz blind'em fawkerzzz SHOUT OUT 2 MONKEY!-PERSEVERANCE-"
Posted by Unknown on "HE STILL SINGS" by ONEANDLONELY
- "Ahhhhhhhhh this piece is incredible my nigga dis PERSEVERANCE flesh of your flesh and blood of your blood yeah ha hah! SALUTE *P snaps poeticly forever*-PERSEVERANCE- "
Posted by Unknown on "What the Fuck Is It" by ONEANDLONELY
- "...the way it should be we need carity as poets everything goes around in a circle and if not where do we stand???-PERSEVERANCE- "
Posted by Unknown on "The Mentor" by ONEANDLONELY
- "You lost me again i'm sorry please e-mail me and or just break it down further i'm just saying what i feel i know some poets don't strive to be understood but thats not... "
Posted by Unknown on "The Mentor" by ONEANDLONELY
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