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Two Roses
By ONEANDLONELY
In this world of rock and stone,
Lives a man who would be alone.
Others who know him leave him be,
Very typical as you can see.
Enter my world my love and do your best,
Yesterdays be put to rest.
Over my heart you took control.
Under your wing I gained your soul.
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Copyright 2004 ONEANDLONELY
Comments on "Two Roses"
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A former member wrote:
short, sweet, and well written
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A former member wrote:
awesome.. loved it....
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, down-sx-ft
(46)
wrote:
damn good
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
oh my this was so tender, touching, and deep, a truly beautiful write ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
..b-e-a-u-tiful..
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
That is Just....deep that's the only way I can describe it. Great write. Keep it dark. -Munkey-
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
ahh! this was beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
Damn! This is nice! It brought a tear to my eye. I hardly ever cry. Thanks. Sometimes the shorter poems are the best, big guy! ~Shane~
~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
I like this write, its deep but very easy to follow and understnad. Good job
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
killer last line!!! i liked this one :)
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