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Mom
By ONEANDLONELY
I wrote a poem, Mom,
it’s about you.
I hurt inside, Mom.
I need you!
I cried last night, Mom.
I called for you.
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here,
When my dreams come true?
I held my child, Mom,
In her I see you.
I look at the moon, Mom.
I think of you.
In the mirror, Mom,
I get a glimpse of you.
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here
When my dreams come true?
The days pass, Mom.
I long for you.
My child has left, Mom.
Can I talk to you?
I’m so sad, Mom,
Why are you?
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here
When my dreams come true?
Alone again, Mom,
though not by choice.
As I sit in dark, Mom,
I hear your voice.
The doorbell rings, Mom
My dream has come true..
I look over my shoulder,
And it ‘s really you!
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Copyright 2005 ONEANDLONELY
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A former member wrote:
Aw! This is so beautiful!! You know, the ryhthm for this is almost songlike but it has that hint of difference that screams "I"M A POEM" :D I really like this! It is great!
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, vaultgrl
(185)
wrote:
this is beautiful......and powerful, i really like this, i really hope you can have this.....
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
i love mom poems... to get complete, connected, and together with one's mom is the most powerful thing one can do... i wish you love, peace, and happiness with your mom... 1, Seth
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
even if it takes a lot of work and time it can be so worth it.
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A former member wrote:
So Powerful yet sad but pleaseing!
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On Tuesday, June 7, 2005, PoeticMindBlow
(22) wrote:
awwh
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On Monday, June 6, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
I'd be lost without my mother. This is so sweet and truly amazing.
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On Monday, June 6, 2005, Sentient Ignorance
(9) wrote:
This poem is beautiful in its pain. My mother abandoned me when i was 12 to live on my own. The ending is a masterpiece wrenchin my heart to new heights.
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this I lost my mother to cancer 11 years ago Not only did I lose mom but I lost mt best freind in life ....Lovely work
and it's not too sweet for us to comment on :)
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
Thank you ladies. Do you think this is too sweet for the men to comment on?
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
So sweet... Great write ~*~tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
this kinda made me upset 'cause I live across the country from my mother and we rarely ever talk, even though she's crazy and never could raise me I still love her and she's still great
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A former member wrote:
um... yeah... but the point is, I'm glad to hear something like this instead of that hatred I'm always reading
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On Tuesday, May 17, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
Wow, great poem, I like it. I think alot of us feel that way you know.
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A former member wrote:
Sometimes that's really how people feel when they grow older... nice perspective and great rhyming without being annoying or cheesy; Awesome
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