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HE STILL SINGS
By ONEANDLONELY
IN A BRIEF MOMENT,
STRANGE,
HOW THE WORLD UFOLDS,
CHANGE,
IT'S MYSTERY HIDES,
TRUTH.
TO THOSE WHO SEEK
YOUTH.
A MOMENT OR A BREATH,
LONG,
LIVES OF THE LOVING,
GONE.
JOY, AND LOVE,
A GIFT BRINGS,
IN MY HEART,
"HE STILLS SINGS"
DEDICATED TO THE MAN THAT MADE ME,
NOW...
MY,
"GUARDIAN ANGEL"
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Copyright 2004 ONEANDLONELY
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On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, Thorn
(283)
wrote:
ow... the poem wasn't bad, but all these caps made my eyes hurt.
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A former member wrote:
DIS PIECE IZ HOT AZZ DA STOVE ON, IT'S MADD DEEP N YES DIS IZ g=CAPS OUT OF SPITE TURN DA CONTRAST N BRYTNESS UOF LIL PUSSY'Z-PERSEVERANCE-
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A former member wrote:
man people always, always say some stupid shit "Ohh the caps my eyes" fist up PANTHER fuck deez dickheadz blind'em fawkerzzz SHOUT OUT 2 MONKEY!-PERSEVERANCE-
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
Shane is right (as always) the caps have a purpose and belong to the peom just as much as the words. Wonderful...if only I know he who stills sings. Keep it dark. -Munkey-
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
Thanks Shane.
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A former member wrote:
Caps or no caps? You decide. Is your capitalization indicative of the title? I don't think your readers thought of this. Or did they? A soul is still a soul. It doesn't matter if the soul screams, sings, or shouts, as long as it communicates.~Shane~
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
This is very inspiring... a brillant play of words. Bethany
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On Sunday, June 6, 2004, Griffin
(114) wrote:
i enjoyed it, but capitols annoy me, keep writing
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
thank you for your comment, i will read your works. thank you
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A former member wrote:
I find it inspiring and thoughtful to your guardian angel. I actually like the capitalize because its different. oh, thank you for your comment on my poem.
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
I DON'T HAVE WORDS LIKE FUCK YOU IN MY TITLES,SO I GUESS I WON'T BE READ.
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
DO what you DO ONE it's great and I liked it!! CAPS!!!! -Munkey-
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On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
MIGHT HELP IF YOU DIDN'T CAPITALIZE EVERYTNING. THAT'S JUST AN IDEA...seriously dude.
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
CAPS CAPS BE AFRIAD OF MY CAPS EVEN IF THEY HAVE A PURPOSE THAT YOU ARE TO STUPID TO UNDERSTAND!!!!!!!!!BOO!!!! THERES MORE CAPS!!!!! -Munkey-
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...yOU KnoW, juST LiKe wHEn pOEpLe Do ThiS, iT gETs BotHErSoMe...WeLl, ManY Of uS Do NOt AppReCiAtE AlL ThoSE CapItAlS...ThaNK yOu...
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck
(244) wrote:
LMAO...sorry...lmao.
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
Hey Jedi_MindFuck!! What did you mean by, LMAO...sorry...Imao
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On Saturday, April 3, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...had to do it...*throws out his 'asshole' card*...okay, I'm done...Really, though...the yelling on top of the rude comments on my buddies will get one nowhere, but there's still room in my heart for ya, buddy...
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Like I had said before, capitols take away from the whole purpose. If you had more of an optimistic approach on things, you will be heard. You are a great writer, dont let your doubts kill that. -Morb
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On Thursday, April 1, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
How can just capitalizing,ruin a poem? I am not being facetious, I just need to know.
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On Thursday, April 1, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
All captials are actually harder on the eye, which makes it a little more difficult to read... it also reads like the poem is 'shouted'. The same with emails... hope this helps. Fox
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Kinda gives you that wincing feeling, aching to the eyes and ears. Sometimes caps are good, just not the whole thing.
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