Comments by All Members
- "Oh man...this is mind altering...you set fire to all these thoughts in my head, and all of a sudden, they spontaneously combusted into a magnificent piece of art. This piece has such a complex, evocative nature."
Posted by Unknown on "within the ashes lies the silence" by theBAC
- "Ouch. This one's a stinger. Nicely executed. I think it's people who can write shorter poems and make them memorable than even the longer ones that shows talent...sort of like nailing a long, detailed poem with that very last line. Yeah. "
Posted by Unknown on "con amore siempre" by theBAC
- "Oh wow. I know that feeling. You captured it brilliantly in so few words. "
Posted by Unknown on "niggle" by theBAC
- "The title is perfectly fitting...I'm coming to like all of these shorter poems...who ever said a short poem couldn't have just as much feeling as a longer, more elaborated one?"
Posted by Unknown on "we've come too Far to fall" by theBAC
- "aw man now this is just brilliant,absolutely,raised a big smile when i read that ending"
Posted by Anth on "niggle" by theBAC
- "_this is probably your best offering to date...the repetition of and progression of the 'end' sequence was highly effective.and the last stanza... a heartbreaker.excellent."
Posted by suicideseason on "holos kaustos" by theBAC
- "This piece strung a familiar chord within me... I have often had these thoughts, and when you are in love they are very scary indeed. I love you how you wrote it. C-ya. ~ Asheai"
Posted by Unknown on "midnight has come & gone" by theBAC
- "i love this,the feeling that drifts just above the thoughts,thiers a kind of sound to it,something mystic"
Posted by Anth on "in saecula saeculorum" by theBAC
- "incredible!!!!!the imagery of the two children,the eyes, the scenes, and the meanings im totally astounded, this is a fave for sure "
Posted by Anth on "holos kaustos" by theBAC
- "This seemed to stop my breathing for a while there. Fucking AMAZING. All those connections... Just got more and more intense... So way out and so totally possible at the same time. I feel so insignificant. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "freedom fries (or the all-american all-stars)" by theBAC
- "Will we indeed? I hope a day could come when that could be said, but we seem to be pulled in further and further into our own web of destruction. I hope we can sort out our mess rather than become more swallowed in it. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "shitwanga" by theBAC
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