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stargazer (or an idle dreamer)
By theBAC
if i stopped my heart from beating
if i stopped my lungs from breathing
if i masked my scent
& didn’t blink
would you know i was there
if we were in a dark room together
could you sense my love for you?
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, July 9, 2004, Mistress Shadow
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wrote:
excellent, although I'm not sure what exactly stirs me about it, but something does. ~T~
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A former member wrote:
I've often wondered this...in simpler words...exquisitely written.
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Anth
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brilliant work,the title is brilliant for this,im not sure what else to say,its apparent how good this is
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