stargazer (or an idle dreamer)

By theBAC


if i stopped my heart from beating
if i stopped my lungs from breathing
if i masked my scent
& didn’t blink
would you know i was there
if we were in a dark room together
could you sense my love for you?

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mistress Shadow On Friday, July 9, 2004, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    excellent, although I'm not sure what exactly stirs me about it, but something does. ~T~

  • A former member wrote: I've often wondered this...in simpler words...exquisitely written.

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    brilliant work,the title is brilliant for this,im not sure what else to say,its apparent how good this is

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