niggle

By theBAC

i’m reaching out
extending my hands
to dance with ghosts
but even they
are holding out
for someone better

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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • so_skeevy On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    crazy. very unique i liked it a lot

  • A former member wrote: Oh wow. I know that feeling. You captured it brilliantly in so few words.

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    aw man now this is just brilliant,absolutely,raised a big smile when i read that ending

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