Comments by All Members
- ""enter in, fill the hole"? not intentional.... like Zappa's Dynamo Hum... I thought the call was the mating call of warriors? No? The 'mightiness' suggested power, potency... the call the beckoning, but also the release.... well written... I thought it ingenious really, to take that which is most masculine in a traditional sense, and reveal masculinity's 'double-edged sword' ;) well done...."
Posted by Unknown on "Mighty Warrior (the calling)" by nightshade
- "Haha the innuendo was not intentional lol. However I must say that gave me a good laugh when you put it like that. One day I might catch you on and explain to you what it really is. Though there is a hint in the title :p"
Posted by nightshade on "Mighty Warrior (the calling)" by nightshade
- "*unsheathes his sword* how much for a merging? Does that include a good smite, too, or is that extra? j/k... well written, perfection in rhyme..... and I would say.. innuendo as well... pin him to the ground?"
Posted by Unknown on "Mighty Warrior (the calling)" by nightshade
- "now this is the shade i remember..he's backkkk. i got chills... u r proving ur versitility.. niceee."
Posted by natalie on "Empty fears" by nightshade
- "u got wings with this one for sure...nicely done shademan.... have u been drinking redbull?(smile)"
Posted by natalie on "Unsung melody" by nightshade
- "much lighter than your usual work shade and yet its subject matter is still a bit heavy. i love the picture this paints"
Posted by Unknown on "Unsung melody" by nightshade
- "freedom! (braveheart should be lurking somewhere in the wings)
really lovely shade.. touches all the light spots in my heart."
Posted by natalie on "Chasing Pavement" by nightshade
- "Some things Draven must be brought forth out of the darkness and into the light and the alleys they call home will forever strike fear in the hearts of mankind.
As far as revisiting said alleys I personally only want to do that when I have about 10 high powered search lights and maybe an RPG and a nice large flamethrower.
I must say the response I have gotten from this one work has pleased me yet it still feels wrong to be pleased about conjuring such horrid thoughts and emotions in my reader."
Posted by nightshade on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "Sometimes it's hard to cut that malignancy out for it is as the word has come to suggest so deeply wound about our actual core.
Also many manage to break free of that cycle so vicious more so than the media suggest. For some it never grabs a foothold. However the media loves to focus on those few who are truly incurable.
The secret however is in three things each equally important. One is educating yourself of the facts and comprehending what is going on and how to stop it. Second is having individuals around you who support you know matter how vile you (or others) think you are. And the last thing needed is a desire to change and understanding how to avoid falling back into that cycle."
Posted by nightshade on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "Sometimes lust childhood is even more disturbing than adult life. It is one thing however to know that to be a fact and another to experience it.
I know there is a saying in a well publicized book something about "When I was a child I spoke as a child." and then something about putting away childish things. However what does one do when the "childish" things are more than some adults can handle? We have things ingrained in us as children some good some bad however for some we must refine those things and learn and expand our understanding.
However that being said there are also times when childhood is really as good as some say it should be. Those are what we should cherish and remember."
Posted by nightshade on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "just here reading and enjoying the site. wow! seems as if i came in to the right place,..laters,..p.d."
Posted by Unknown on "Turned Away" by nightshade
- "a kind of sadness took me over as i read this poem. such a harsh reality... the hurt is so real.. and the air is pregnant with the expectation of impending suicide. "
Posted by natalie on "Turned Away" by nightshade
- "oh dear...the former prey becomes the new hunter...for some it would seem...some continue to run in the same vicious circle whilst others manage to break free...I wonder what the secret is...'Malignant' suggests no cure...damn...cut it out..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "A terrible trauma has occurred. So terrible, in fact, that it has been suppressed within your mind for years for fear of merely the thought of reliving it in your mind. But, if you were to muster up your courage, break out, and tell this tale so sickening and morbid, then, and only then shall you reap your vengeance, and free yourself from the torment that's plagued you for what may seem like a lifetime.
Open yourself to others, grasp outstretched hands as if they were your lifeline, and they shall guide you to the light. There, you shall receive bastion, and bounty."
Posted by Asylum on "Discomfiting Twilight" by nightshade
- "Hmmmm, I gotta say, this left me with a less than pleasant feeling about what the consequences of walking down that road may be. Vicious circles should not be given new life, only broken, as the old saying goes. Perhaps there is something to be said though, for at least acknowledging that there does indeed exist at least a small potential for our footsteps to begin to falter on the new path we have chosen to walk in life. Some dark alleyways should never be walked into again, never. I don't know, who is to say. Definitely a Darker and somewhat disturbing piece though. Those are sometimes the most emotionally challenging ones for me to write personally, you did an excellent job with this one, nonetheless.--Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "i try to think of your story and i wonder if this is somewhat autobiographical.childhood isnt always the wondrous thing we make it out to be, sometimes its just as hard as adult life, sadder in a way. "
Posted by Unknown on "Malignant trust " by nightshade
- "trying to live up to others expectations is actually no way to live. id check the seventh line, it reads sorta funny. "
Posted by Unknown on "Turned Away" by nightshade
- "there are no prejudices that death keeps....no truer words have been said.... bastard does not dicriminate. well done"
Posted by natalie on "I come" by nightshade
[Next]
