Comments by All Members
- "*cries* were i an angel, i'd hold you tight and safe in my wings tonight, until you cried yourself to sleep, because thats what i want an angel to do for me...
hang in there, i know it hurts. ~pf~"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
- "you aren't broken, its the disease telling you that...you're beautiful inside, sensitive and you don't deserve your pain. i wish i knew how to tell you to make it go away. keep writing it, it helps me a little..."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
- "so sad, and so true in life. It sucks that the things and the people that we care most for in life can make us feel this way. awesome job as always amanda, keep it up, I love it when you post new works ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
- "Salvation is an ugly word.. implying that we somehow are not even human, we are all at once less than perfect, and perfection is an illusion. True, we cannot save someone from themselves, but we can strive for the betterment of others. Pardon my intrusion"
Posted by blue on "Superhero You" by TornPaperDoll
- "Wow, for a rhyming poem and a very self contradicting piece, this blew me away. There was no definite rhythm but it all seemed to fit together somehow. The rhyme scheme really is untouchable, and the the content quite genius. Well done. "
Posted by sIo on "Tell Me Why" by TornPaperDoll
- "holy shat....... wow....... i'm honestly speachless. i read it four times through.... wow.... hm.... wow. definatley relatable. LOVELY job!! "
Posted by smearedXmakeup on "Missed" by TornPaperDoll
- "extremely beautiful and delicate this piece here is, strong words and emotions that even i can't describe you once again spilled out on to the paper, excellent job ~Emptyness~ ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Real Grace" by TornPaperDoll
- "::smiles:: Torn, this was beautiful. It reminds me of my mother in a sense, she was pregnant with me when she was 15. "
Posted by Angst Queen on "Real Grace" by TornPaperDoll
- "I admit, I never read much of your work, but I stumbled upon this today, and was shocked...I agree with OLd SouL. Simply beautiful."
Posted by Six-Out on "Tell Me Why" by TornPaperDoll
- "*deep breath* ah this is a truly amazing piece--glad I found it--what you express here is so familiar to me and I love the way you wrap it up with the ending which shows that you are seeing yourself reflected in the subject of your poem--awesome"
Posted by Northstar on "At The Bar" by TornPaperDoll
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